Ode to black tiny hair
Do you know when I was 4?I had short hair style.At that time, everyone teased me.So I hated you.but after,when I looked at my picture with that hair style.All families remember me and laugh including me.That is one thing I can say you thank you.
I know you are poor.even there is perfect clothes and face,if you mess.then you will have a teasing and hide in the cap or hood.Also,live in the dark all day.when there is fighting,you'll pick it out and lose your home.I'm sorry to hear that.
I know you like floor.but,I can't understand.Why do you like to travel to floor and stay too long?You maybe don't know how dirty the floor is.Because you make it dirty.Please be my hand when I sweep you.
Meet again in the evening.
Bye.From Sojung
Sojung,
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I can understand your feeling about your hair as I do. I got a lot of tease,too. Anyway,it's so cute! XD
답글삭제You're ode was simple and cute!! And your topic was really creative and interesting! I love your ode:-)
답글삭제Don't be angry.
답글삭제It will be better :)