argumentative essay

 Nowadays students are getting a lot of stress from school. This is because school makes students study about 8~10 subjects. So students are tired of that. However, students studying basic subjects and choosing 1 or 2 additional subjects that they need or like can solve this problem.

 In school, students sleep because they studied until late at night. Students don’t know why they are in school and studying Korean, Math, Science, History, Art, and P.E. They just study for test scores and after the test they forget it. But if students study the subjects they choose, they will be more passionate and put in more effort.

 Actually, students have dreams. But over time, they lose their dream. They don’t have time to think about that. Students are always nervous because they study many subjects, even if it is not connected with their dream. School presses students to get a 100 in all subjects. It can be useful, but in the future students will forget what they have been learning and don’t have expert knowledge about a specific part. Studying all subjects is a waste of time.

 But there are 2 reasons to disagree. First, the dream job I want to get may require me to understand contents between two different subjects. For example an architect needs knowledge of both math and art.It is connected. We can learn one after another, but it may be very hard.

 Second, through studying all subjects, our perspective of the world can widen. After learning, we ask questions: why it is this, and what about this… While thinking about the answer,our thinking power increases and the world develops.

Studying all the subjects is good and also can be useful.But it’s mostly a waste of time and stressful.We should study basic subjects plus a few need-or-like subjects. It will make students happy and passionate.

Vignette-Movie

Movie

Nice film, Nice actors, Nice scene, and popular.Have the power to change people.We can see when we are happy,lonely, sad, nothing to do, love.or it make these.It doesn't betray.This is very attractive. It make me imagine,think in a new way.And think about that all day.It can be the proof of history and make history.

After watching 'BRAVE'

 

 I think 'Brave' is interesting and excited.However it also include nowdays our social problems.I think DUTY and TRADITION should change by situation  is the most important problems of social.and how important family is.

 First,in the movie Merida is a princess.Elinor who is her mom always said princess have to know about the history,kingdom,get up early...That is a princess's duty.this is correct.But,Merida wants to ride a horse,bow,too.Most of people think that we should keep only duty and that's all.While doing duty,also we can do what we want.Duty can change what situation am I.

  Second,We don't have to follow all our traditions.We have to keep our traditions.But some of these are bad.Like if female born throw away and don't care about.We must not follow and change or develop them.If it is country and in  peace.

Third,still there are stereotype between man and woman.Compare with past nowday is better.But people think men should tall,handsome,strong,play sports well and not lose.And woman should careful of their conduct,not be forward and working in the house.That's why we also can heard you don't like girl or boy,and we surprise when there is man nurse.

 Fourth, Also the movie shows family.I think family is very interesting and surprised.Just,blood continue...we worried about their health and love them much.Although Merida's family fought they cooperate and gather again.Through this their family can more stronger and take care of people well.

 Also, Merida's family got in trouble because of speak.People usually speak without thinking.Later they feel sorry to them but can't easily apologzize.Espeacially,when we are angry.So we have to think how is feeling before speak.

 This movie shows these society problems.Every knows,but they just didn't suggest and complain.Start break the stereotype ,tradition,duty,families.If these are develop world gonna be in peace and there are less problems(complain).WE CAN DO IT!

Diamante poem

  SNOW

QUITE  COLD

FALLING  COVERING  MELTING

SNOWMAN SNOWBALL  UMBRELLA  RAINCOAT

DROPPING  HITTING  POPPING

NOISY  HOT

    RAIN

ode black tiny HAIR

 Ode to black tiny hair

  Do you know when I was 4?I had short hair style.At that time, everyone teased me.So I hated you.but after,when I looked at my picture with that hair style.All families remember me and laugh including me.That is one thing I can say you thank you.



  I know you are poor.even there is perfect clothes and face,if you mess.then you will have a teasing and hide in the cap or hood.Also,live in the dark all day.when there is fighting,you'll pick it out and lose your home.I'm sorry to hear that.



  I know you like floor.but,I can't understand.Why do you like to travel to floor and stay too long?You maybe don't know how dirty the floor is.Because you make it dirty.Please be my hand when I sweep you.

  I don't have any feeling to you before I came to this camp.So are you upset me?If you are,I'm very sorry.I'll give you love from now on.I hope we'll not fight again.
Meet again in the evening.

  Bye.From Sojung

30 day challenge

I'll keep these remain GLPS camp

GOAL 1: Have courage

          -do NOT hesitate
          -taking a question note
         -Be true to myself

GOAL 2: Go to bed before 12

          -Get up early in the morning
         -do not play cell phone before sleep
         -make my mind relax

GOAL 3: Eat snack 2 times a day

          -Don't look food

          -brush my teeth early

          -check everyday

Hello Everyone

Hello.My name is Sojung.Welcome to my 'Mary in white MHS'
I'm in GLPS 19. I think it's not easy...I'm 15 years old girl this year.And I live in Anyang.I have 4 family members,I love them much.I don't have special hobby.But I like  listening pop songs.I can't choose my favorite song.Most of music is good.Also, I like watching moveis.but not often.I saw 'Hobbit' recently.Because my favorite movie is 'The lord of the rings'so far.It'll change someday.
Last I like making or writing somethig.So I interested in pens.I have various kinds of blue pens.
I hope you enjoy this blog.Have a good day :)