argumentative essay

 Nowadays students are getting a lot of stress from school. This is because school makes students study about 8~10 subjects. So students are tired of that. However, students studying basic subjects and choosing 1 or 2 additional subjects that they need or like can solve this problem.

 In school, students sleep because they studied until late at night. Students don’t know why they are in school and studying Korean, Math, Science, History, Art, and P.E. They just study for test scores and after the test they forget it. But if students study the subjects they choose, they will be more passionate and put in more effort.

 Actually, students have dreams. But over time, they lose their dream. They don’t have time to think about that. Students are always nervous because they study many subjects, even if it is not connected with their dream. School presses students to get a 100 in all subjects. It can be useful, but in the future students will forget what they have been learning and don’t have expert knowledge about a specific part. Studying all subjects is a waste of time.

 But there are 2 reasons to disagree. First, the dream job I want to get may require me to understand contents between two different subjects. For example an architect needs knowledge of both math and art.It is connected. We can learn one after another, but it may be very hard.

 Second, through studying all subjects, our perspective of the world can widen. After learning, we ask questions: why it is this, and what about this… While thinking about the answer,our thinking power increases and the world develops.

Studying all the subjects is good and also can be useful.But it’s mostly a waste of time and stressful.We should study basic subjects plus a few need-or-like subjects. It will make students happy and passionate.